Raised by Wolves by Jennifer Lynn Barnes
Genre: YA paranormal (Mystery, werewolves, pack, coming of age)
Series: Book one in the Raised by wolves series
Original Language: English
Publisher: EgmontUSA
Country: USA
Publication Date: June 2010
ISBN: 978-1606840597
Page Count: 432
My Rating: ★★★
Summary
Adopted by the Alpha of a werewolf pack after a rogue wolf brutally killed her parents right before her eyes, fifteen-year-old Bryn knows only pack life, and the rigid social hierarchy that controls it. That doesn't mean that she's averse to breaking a rule or two.
But when her curiosity gets the better of her and she discovers Chase, a new teen locked in a cage in her guardian's basement, and witnesses him turn into a wolf before her eyes, the horrific memories of her parents' murders return. Bryn becomes obsessed with getting her questions answered, and Chase is the only one who can provide the information she needs.
But in her drive to find the truth, will Bryn push too far beyond the constraints of the pack, forcing her to leave behind her friends, her family, and the identity that she's shaped?
Review:
Having been literally raised by wolves, Bronwyn (Bryn) is used to the somewhat strange behaviour of her adopted "family" and peers, but lately they have been acting even more strange than usual. More secretive, like there's something big they are trying to keep from her. And she is determined to find out what.
Unfortunately, I had a few issues with the way she went about this.
Bryn lives with a lady called Ali. Ali fills the role of mother in Bryn's life since she lost her real parents at age 4, even though really she's not old enough to have a daughter her age. Well, I suppose technically she could have but...well you know what I mean.
They have more of a friends-with-a-deep-familial-bond type relationship than a traditional mother daughter relationship. But they are very close, and Bryn respects her a lot. Or so she claims, anyway.
Why then, when Bryn starts to question why people in the pack are acting weirdly around her, does she completely disrespect the wishes of not only Ali, but also those of her pack Alpha not to get involved? Ali -who by the way is 8 months pregnant with a werewolf baby. A very precarious medical state to be in as the death rate of expectant mothers within the pack is scarily high- even asks her at one point, " If I were to ask you to please, for your own good, stay out of it, would you?" To which Bryn (selfishly) replies no.
In fact, instead of staying out of it for her own good, what she should probably do is wait until Ali's actually in labour, then sneak into the Alpha's house, tell his second in command that his Alpha is grievously injured to get him out of the picture, then proceed to snoop around to see what's going on for herself.
Makes perfect sense right? Right?
Ow.
Forget being worried that your "mother" for all intents and purposes might be about to DIE in labour. It's much more important to find out if people are keeping juicy gossip from you, isn't it?
Sadly, this happens within the first quarter of the novel, and she kind of lost me as a reader at this point. If you lose respect for your protagonist it's very, very hard to get it back. And not only did she not get my respect back, but further into the book Bryn does something very similar- only much, much worse.
But she just "had to". And it's okay if you just "had to" isn't it?
So on that logic, if I walk into my kitchen right now and smack my husband in the face, it's okay because I just "had to"...is that how it works?
The rest of the book is a kind of murder mystery plot. There is a boy introduced that you assume is supposed to be the love interest, but there is absolutely no chemistry or any kind of connection between these two at all. This was another very disappointing aspect to the story. They have a mental communication, as do the rest of the members of the pack, but in terms of actual dialogue they probably speak about 50 words to each other in total throughout the whole novel, so their relationship just fell completely flat to me.
In terms of the mythology, the dynamic of the werewolf pack is very similar to that of Patricia Briggs' Mercy Thompson series, only nowhere near as well developed, so we see nothing new in this area either.
The secondary characters were very two dimensional. Telling you that the best friend likes show tunes is not all that's required in terms of character description, I'm afraid. From that are we supposed to deduce that he is a quirky and fun character? It was also mentioned several times that he likes to quote lines from Dirty Dancing. I'm just not sure what I was supposed to make of this information. You can't just tell me a character is quirky and funny. You need to show me. And it just didn't happen.
The biggest positive for me was the execution of the mystery element of the story. This was handled well and I wasn't able to predict where it was going until it actually happened and it was interesting and the pacing was quite good.
Basically, to sum up, the actual story here was good, but the execution and the badly drawn characters let it down.
I don't think I'll bother with book two.